Hello folks,
Have a look about the first composition about a news item (the bombing and terrorist attacks in Paris) written by Sergio Carabias García. This composition is quite good actually:
"Last night, in Paris, France, there was a terrorist attack.
First of all, terrorists attacked too many places around the streets. Then, they hijacked two restaurants, a disco, a theatre, a museum, a shop and a shopping centre, near a hotel and the stadium where there was a football match.
In the disco, there were more casualties than in the other places. There are currently 126 dead people and 99 have been seriously injured so far.
The terrorists may have attacked Paris, because France had previously bombed the Islamic State of Syria. It has been a great tragedy !
By Sergio Carabais García.
If you like his composition, don't be shy and post a comment !
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