Tuesday, April 19, 2016

Mistake corrections. Correct the mistakes in your essays !

Dear students, 
As you keep making the same mistakes over and over again, I think it would be a good idea for you to reflect on the mistakes you make. Let's see how it works :

- It is knowledge that a person is different to other.

- There area few things that some people can change for being better with the rest. 

- People should think what the say before to talk and not lie to your friends. 

- I think that this people don't have a personality.

- Another example of hypocritical behaviour is a person who says that he is Christian but never attend masses and never help people. 

- The government warm that smoking can kill us. 

- In my opinion, an hypocritical behaviour is the attitude that someone has when he is with other people. 

- When people tell not to smoke because it's bad for your health. 

- Also, there is hypocrisy when little kids cry. 

- It is also hypocritical to defend something about a topic, but then you don't carry out it

Well, did you reflect on your mistakes ? Maybe next time you won't make the same mistakes again.

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