Wednesday, March 16, 2016

The best composition of the month : My favourite place (2º ESO A)

As you know Easter holidays are approaching but still some of you keep doing your homework and aprticipating. Yesterday, I asked you to write a composition about your favourite place using the adjectives we have seen in class. After correcting some of your compositions, I selected the best one by Sara García Pelazas. Here you have it :

My favourite place (by Sara García Pelazas)
"My favourite place in the world is a beach in Gijón. The beach's name is San Lorenzao. It is peacefull, pleasant and sandy. In San Lorenzo you can walk on the beach, especially in spring and in autumn. In summer, you can go swimming but the water is very cold. At night, you can have dinner by the beach and listen to the waves. It is an incredible beach."

From : http://www.el-caminoreal.com/geo/playas/playadesanlorenzo.htm
From : http://www.miguelprado.com/gijoneninvierno/PlayaSLorenzo.htm

Thank you Sara for your work. What do you think about Sara's place ? Come on, post a comment ! 

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